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Dear Sir, I am writing a letter to get some information regarding accommodation in Canada through your agency. I am a student and I will go to abroad for my one year program. My course is related to my post- graduation. I have no any place where I live in foreign country. Actually, My wife want to come with me and there is no space. So, I am looking fully furnished rooms with kitchen and drawing room also. I need this type of room is near my university. Other things, all essential markets like food basics, shoppers and many more near my house. Its easy to carry a things. I am seeing these type of house or apartment. My total budget around $1200 per month. I can not pay above of this rent. Please check accordingly and provide a information as soon as possible because we will go next week on 12th April. I am waiting your answer. Thankyou, Yours Sincerely, Karan.

Dear Sir, I am writing a letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 information regarding accommodation in Canada through your agency. I am a student and I will There isn't usually a preposition before "abroad". Did you mean "go abroad"?go abroad
go to abroad
 for my When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "one-year"one-year
one year
 program. My course is related
 to my post- graduation. I have Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?now
no
 any place where I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in foreign country. Actually, My wife want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 with me and there is no space. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I am looking fully
 furnished rooms with kitchen and drawing room also
. I need this type of room is near my university. Other things, all essential markets like food basics, shoppers and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 more near my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. Did you mean "It's" (="It is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?It'sIt is
Its
 easy to carry Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a thing" or simply "things"?a thingthings
a things
. I am seeing these type of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 or apartment. My total budget around $1200 per month. I can not pay above of this rent. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
accordingly
 and provide Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 information as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 we will go next
 week on 12th April. I am waiting your answer. Possible spelling mistake found.Thank you
Thankyou
, Yours Sincerely
, Possible spelling mistake found.KarenKaraKazanKarinKoranSaran
Karan
. 