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Flora mail abou Real estate photos

Flora mail abou Real estate photos 5Baye

Hi Flora, Thanks for your email. For the deadline you mentioned, we can meet it. Fortunately, she has had no reaction to the vaccine so far. But she said she is fine. I hope so too. If we cannot continue, I will let you know at least 12 hours in advance so that you have the best preparation and do not interrupt your work. Are you able to add fire place fire and stove fire? Yes, we will try Have a good day.

Hi Flora,

Thanks for your email.

For the deadline you mentioned, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 it.

Fortunately
, she has had no reaction to the vaccine This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 far. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 she said she is fine. I hope This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 too.

If we cannot continue, I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know at least 12 hours in advance This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that you have the best preparation and do not interrupt your work.

Are you able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 fire place fire and stove fire? Yes, we will try

Have a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 day. 

IELTS letter Flora mail abou Real estate photos

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

83 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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