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Hello all, Kindly share your valuable outputs on the given letter. Thanks in advance. you rent an apartment and recently a new tenant has moved in above you. This tenants behavior is causing you lots of problems. write a letter to your landlord. In the letter -> Describe what the new tenant is doing -> explain why it is disturbing you so much -> tell your landlord what would you like him/her to do about it

Dear Ms Kaur, I am writing in regard to express my dissatisfaction with the attitude of the tenants who had recently moved on the above floor of my apartment. I do not like to complain, but the last two weeks have been terribly awful. The new tenant has four young children who are too young to be at school. They run all time which is problematic for me during my office hours as I have been working from home since October. Also, the condition is further aggravated by the two large dogs which keep on barking without any reason. As I have several meetings scheduled with my office clients during morning hours, the constant sound from them do not allow me to concentrate on my work. Also, I have got an official warning from my employer to curb this menace because we are on the verge to loose our potential customers for the future. Therefore, I would request you to take some stringent actions in order to reduce the deafening sound from them. You can either ask them to put the wooden flooring on their floor or request them to minimize the children and the pets movement during my working hours. I look forward forward to your response with the possible solutions. Yours sincerely, Prabhdeep Chhatwal
Dear Ms
Kaur
,

I am writing in regard to express my dissatisfaction with the attitude of the tenants who had recently
moved
on the above floor of my apartment.

I do not like to complain,
but
the last two weeks have been
terribly
awful. The new tenant has four young children who are too young to be at school. They run all time which is problematic for me during my office hours as I have been working from home since October.
Also
, the condition is
further
aggravated by the two large dogs which
keep
on barking without any reason.

As I have several meetings scheduled with my office clients during morning hours, the constant sound from them do not
allow
me to concentrate on my work.
Also
, I have
got
an official warning from my employer to curb this menace
because
we are on the verge to
loose
our potential customers for the future.

Therefore
, I would request you to take
some
stringent actions in order to
reduce
the deafening sound from them. You can either ask them to put the wooden flooring on their floor or request them to minimize the children and the
pets
movement during my working hours.

I look
forward forward
to your response with the possible solutions.

Yours
sincerely
,

Prabhdeep
Chhatwal
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IELTS letter Hello all, Kindly share your valuable outputs on the given letter. Thanks in advance. you rent an apartment and recently a new tenant has moved in above you. This tenants behavior is causing you lots of problems. write a letter to your landlord. In the letter -> Describe what the new tenant is doing -> explain why it is disturbing you so much -> tell your landlord what would you like him/her to do about it

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