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Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it

Dear Sir/Madam, I am hereby writing this letter to inform you about my dissatisfaction towards your product. Last week, I ordered a pair of RayBan sun glasses from your ecommerce website. I am attaching a copy of the order for your reference. Although, the item arrived before the promised delivery date but, it is not the same shade that I choose, I received a grey one while I selected blue. Moreover, the left lense also has a scratch on it. I liked the product to the core, so I request you to replace my goggles. If that is not possible then I kindly want you to refund my money, the receipt is attached. I hope you will do the needful at the earliest. Yours faithfully, Mrs. Sara
Dear Sir/Madam, I am hereby writing this letter to inform you about my dissatisfaction towards your product. Last week, I ordered a pair of RayBan sun glasses from your
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ecommerce
website. I am attaching a copy of the order for your reference. Although, the item arrived
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before
the promised delivery date
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but
, it is not the same shade that I choose, I received a
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grey
one while I selected blue.
Moreover
, the
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left
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lense
also
has a scratch on it. I liked the product to the core,
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so
I request you to replace my goggles. If
that is
not possible then I kindly want you to refund my money, the receipt
is attached
. I hope you will do the needful at the earliest. Yours
faithfully
, Mrs.
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Sara

IELTS letter Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it

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  American English
1 paragraphs
126 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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