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You want to start your own small business. Write a letter to a bank requesting information about obtaining a business loan to finance your new company

Dear Sir, I am one among the customers availing your esteemed service. Through this epistle, I would like to ask about the fiscal support provided by the bank. I want to start own smaal business and i want to get information about the loan. I have completed my graduation. Now, i want to open my own clothing shop. I need to five lakh rupees for start own business. I repay all money with interest in five years. I hope you would consider my request and provide me the needful information about the same Your sincerely, Navjot singh

Dear Sir, I am one among the customers availing your esteemed service. Through this epistle, I would like to ask about the fiscal support provided by the bank.

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IELTS letter You want to start your own small business. Write a letter to a bank requesting information about obtaining a business loan to finance your new company

Letter

American English

3 paragraphs

96 words

This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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