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You want to start your own small business. Write a letter to a bank requesting information about obtaining a business loan to finance your new company

Dear Sir, I am one among the customers availing your esteemed service. Through this epistle, I would like to ask about the fiscal support provided by the bank. I want to start own smaal business and i want to get information about the loan. I have completed my graduation. Now, i want to open my own clothing shop. I need to five lakh rupees for start own business. I repay all money with interest in five years. I hope you would consider my request and provide me the needful information about the same Your sincerely, Navjot singh
Dear Sir, I am one among the customers availing your esteemed service. Through this epistle, I would like to ask about the fiscal support provided by the bank.

I want to
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start
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smaal
business and
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i
want to
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get
information about the loan. I have completed my graduation.
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Now
,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
want to open my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
clothing shop. I need to five lakh rupees for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
business. I repay all money with interest in five years.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope you would consider my request and provide me the needful information about the same

Your
sincerely
,
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Navjot
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singh
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IELTS letter You want to start your own small business. Write a letter to a bank requesting information about obtaining a business loan to finance your new company

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
96 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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