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Write a letter to one of your classmates and invite him to a class reunion. Write -When and where is the party -give some details about what is going to happen at the party -tell him/her what you have been doing recently

Dear Mihai, Hope this letter finds you in good and healthy state. As you know, it has been really long since we met after passing out of college. Last week I met Ram and during our discussions we came up with the idea of celebrating our class reunion. Moreover, next month we will be completing 10 years of our graduation. So what else could be the best occasion to celebrate other than this. The party will be held on 27th-Mar-2021 at Papa Johns in the downtown area, Toronto from 7 PM onwards. There will be lots of fun activities for us and our families. And not to forget, the special singing show of Indian Idol, Ramu Singh. Apart from these, there will be a special buffet after the entertainment programs. These days we all have been busy due hectic work schedules and could not catchup. Thus please consider this invitation to attend the party. Eagerly waiting to see you. Yours lovingly, Kishore
Dear
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Mihai
,

Hope this letter finds you in
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good
and healthy state. As you know, it has been
really
long since we met after passing out of college. Last week I met Ram and during our discussions we came up with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
of celebrating our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
reunion.
Moreover
,
next
month we will be completing 10 years of our graduation.
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So
what else could be the best occasion to celebrate other than this.

The party will
be held
on 27th-Mar-2021 at Papa Johns in the downtown area, Toronto from 7 PM onwards. There will be lots of fun activities for us and our families. And not to forget, the special singing
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show
of Indian Idol,
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Ramu
Singh. Apart from these, there will be a special buffet after the entertainment programs.

These days we all have been busy due hectic work schedules and could not
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catchup
.
Thus
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please
consider this invitation to attend the party.
Eagerly
waiting to
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see
you.

Yours
lovingly
,

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Kishore
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IELTS letter Write a letter to one of your classmates and invite him to a class reunion. Write -When and where is the party -give some details about what is going to happen at the party -tell him/her what you have been doing recently

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  American English
6 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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