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friend invited to watch a movie together

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Dear Tom, Hope you’re doing well and looking forward to your holiday in London next month. Thank you for inviting me to watch a movie together during your trip. Unfortunately, I won’t be able to meet you on 25th September as I’ve an important exam on the following day. This exam is really crucial for me and I’ve to score good marks. Can you tell me what your exact travel dates are? If possible, can we meet after 28th September, by then I’ll be free from exams and assignments which I need to submit for my course? Let me know so that I can plan our meeting accordingly. I was just wondering, how about you staying at my place during your stay? We can visit to the nearby tourist destinations and go to the club which is recently opened next to my building. I’m really looking forward to meet you. Warm regards, Sam
Dear Tom,

Hope you’re doing well and looking forward to your holiday in London
next
month. Thank you for inviting me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
a movie together during your trip.

Unfortunately, I won’t be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you on 25th September as I’ve an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
exam on the following day. This exam is
really
crucial for me and I’ve to score
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
marks.

Can you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
me what your exact travel dates are? If possible, can we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
after 28th September, by then I’ll be free from exams and assignments which I need to submit for my course?

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me know
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I can plan our meeting
accordingly
. I was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
wondering, how about you staying at my place during your stay? We can visit to the nearby tourist destinations and go to the club which is recently opened
next
to my building.

I’m
really
looking forward to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you.

Warm regards,

Sam
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IELTS letter friend invited to watch a movie together

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  American English
8 paragraphs
152 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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