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friend agree to take care of your house and pet on your holiday

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Dear Marty, Hey Buddy, Hope all is well in the house and Maxi. I am spending my holiday in Paris. I look forward to see the Eiffel Tower and their beautiful museums. You can reach me through my roaming number +79431649 anytime. I am staying at the Grand Hyatt Hotel Paris. It is a five star hotel with the nice view facing the Eiffel Tower. The services of the hotel is excellent. By the way, you will find the food of Maxi in a white box container located in the car garage next to the door. I usually give Maxi food at 9: 00 in the morning, 1: 00 in the afternoon and 8: 00 in the evening. Sometimes Maxi wants to have a midnight snack, so just give him a little ample amount of food so Maxi can still sleep well. In the morning please bring Maxi out for a walk and he loves to run. Hope you a physically fit for this. Garbage Collection in Al Barsha is every Monday, Wednesday and Saturday at 5 in the evening. Also don't forget to give extra cash to the collector, as they always clean the trash bin before they return it back. This is just to repay their kindness. Please do not forget to water the plants, specially the Red Bean Cactus as this plant was a gift from my ex-wife as a remembrance of her. Hope tp speak to you soon. Thank you for doing this for me. Let me know if you need something in Paris All the best, Fred
Dear Marty,

Hey Buddy, Hope all is well in the
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. I am spending my holiday in Paris. I look forward to
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see
the Eiffel Tower and their
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beautiful
museums. You can reach me through my roaming number +79431649 anytime. I am staying at the Grand Hyatt Hotel Paris. It is a
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five star
hotel with the nice view facing the Eiffel Tower. The services of the hotel is excellent. By the way, you will find the food of
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Maxi
in a white box container located in the car garage
next
to the door. I
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Maxi
food at 9: 00 in the morning, 1: 00 in the afternoon and 8: 00 in the evening.
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wants to have a midnight snack,
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give him a
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ample amount of food
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Maxi
can
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sleep well. In the morning
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bring
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out for a
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walk and
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to run. Hope you a
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Garbage Collection in Al
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is every Monday, Wednesday and Saturday at 5 in the evening.
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don't forget to give extra cash to the collector, as they always clean the trash bin
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they return it back. This is
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just
to repay their kindness.
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do not forget to water the plants,
specially
the Red Bean Cactus as this plant was a gift from my ex-wife as a remembrance of her.

Hope
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tp
speak to you
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. Thank you for doing this for me.
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Let
me know if you need something in Paris

All the best,
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Fred
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IELTS letter friend agree to take care of your house and pet on your holiday

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5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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