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for the past year you have been a member of a local club . now you want discontinue

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am James, and I am writing this letter to inform you behalf on the next month I will discontinue membership. Since 2020 November, I have joined your youth club membership for monthly payment, because the club provides various benefits to conduct the different sports programs. During the period, I have paid for credit cards, and I have provided a direct debit amount for every month. The monthly club fee for only 75 dollars. The youth club is various facilities, but it is like inside a long playground for the football ground, table tennis, bill birds, and Olympic play circle for walking playgrounds. It is a stunning club outside more playgrounds but the senior citizen's playground and restrooms. I would like to appreciate your service and various amenities. Unfortunately, my company had transferred for me another place, so I have to cancel for a monthly membership, but no longer than deduct money from my account. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, James.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am James, and I am writing this letter to inform you behalf on the
next
month I will discontinue membership. Since 2020 November, I have
joined
your youth
club
membership for monthly payment,
because
the
club
provides various benefits to conduct the
different
sports programs. During the period, I have paid for credit cards, and I have provided a direct debit amount for every month. The monthly
club
fee for
only
75 dollars.

The youth
club
is various facilities,
but
it is like inside a long
playground
for the football ground, table tennis, bill birds, and Olympic play circle for walking
playgrounds
. It is a stunning
club
outside more
playgrounds
but
the senior citizen's
playground
and restrooms.

I would like to appreciate your service and various amenities. Unfortunately, my
company
had transferred for me another place,
so
I
have to
cancel for a monthly membership,
but
no longer than deduct money from my account.

I look forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

James.
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IELTS letter for the past year you have been a member of a local club. now you want discontinue

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  American English
7 paragraphs
170 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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