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Your foreign friend wants to visit your country. He/ she has written to you for advice and information. Write a letter to your foreign friend, giving advice about the best place to spend a holiday and telling him/her what clothes and other equipment to pack.

Your foreign friend wants to visit your country. He/ she has written to you for advice and information. Write a letter to your foreign friend, giving advice about the best place to spend a holiday and telling him/her what clothes and other equipment to pack. LbneK
Dear Lily, I am pleased to receive your letter after a long time. Besides, I am also very aware that you have decreed to visit my country. I know you're nervous and nervous when you first visit a strange country. Let me give you some advice when visiting my country. First of all, I recommend you go to Da Nang City, one of the three largest cities in Viet Nam. It's not the capital city, but it's called the most livable city in Viet Nam. If you come here, I will take you to visit some famous tourist attractions such as Ba Na Hill, Hoi An's ancient town. Second, since Vietnam is a tropical country, you won't need to bring much of your winter clothes. Finally, our people are very enthusiastic and friendly, so you don't have to get too nervous to come here. enjoy your wonderful vacation. If you need any more information, please feel free to ask anytime. Love Huyen Ngan
Dear Lily,

I am
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pleased
to receive your letter after a long time.
Besides
, I am
also
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very
aware that you have decreed to visit my country.

I know you're nervous and nervous when you
first
visit a strange country.
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Let
me give you
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some
advice when visiting my country.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, I recommend you go to
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Da
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Nang
City, one of the three largest
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cities
in
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Viet
Nam. It's not the capital city,
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but
it's called the most livable city in
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Viet
Nam. If you
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come
here, I will take you to visit
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some
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famous
tourist attractions such as Ba Na Hill,
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Hoi
An's ancient town.

Second, since Vietnam is a tropical country, you won't need to bring much of your winter clothes.

Finally
, our
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people
are
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very
enthusiastic and friendly,
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so
you don't
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have to
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get
too nervous to
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come
here.
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enjoy
your wonderful vacation.

If you need any more information,
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please
feel free to ask anytime.

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Love


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IELTS letter Your foreign friend wants to visit your country. He/ she has written to you for advice and information. Write a letter to your foreign friend, giving advice about the best place to spend a holiday and telling him/her what clothes and other equipment to pack.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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