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dear sir / madam, I am writing to ask for about information your hotel. We are planning to stay at your hotel for three nights. We want double room please let me know if your room is a double room. We need a large desk so can you confirm if your room has a large desk. We would like to know the meal are included in the price. Could you tell me how long it is from AXCenter and how many parking spaces available are. I want to know more did your hotel has the gym and the pool. I look forward to hearing from you. Kind regards,

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