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You are in an au-pair program and you will meet up with your host family very soon.

You are in an au-pair program and you will meet up with your host family very soon. G9bPo
Dear my host family, I would like to thank you for reading my letter and spending time getting to know me better. I hope my words will make you have a different view of me. I’m going to introduce myself and my little family. My name is Danh. I’m 19 years old. I’m living in Ho Chi Minh city which has numerous beautiful and attractive locations. My family consists of my parents, my younger brother and me. My father is a director of the packaging company. My mother is an accounting manager at Vietinbank. My younger brother is a freshman at University of Economics and Finance. As an extroverted person who want to show my personalities with other people, there are numerous outdoor activities such as playing sports, having a picnic and so on, especially hanging out with my friends. Not only chatting with them, but I also enhance my knowledge about social life. We can dicuss and give our perspectives in some head-aching problems. Beside my activities with my friends, I have a part-time job as a Chemistry tutor for twelfth and two nineth graders. To be honest, I’m a fan of dancing so in my leisure time I usually practice dancing to burn the calories and improve my health, especially in this pandemic situation. When I choreograph, I can combine movement and personal feelings to illustrate the content of certain songs. Besides self-improvement, I join dance clubs like ArTeam, PNDance to develop myself and made friends with the same passion. I am blessed to have such a loving and caring family and I hope we can also be one during my stay at your house. Love, Danh
Dear my host family,

I would like to thank you for reading my letter and spending time getting to know me better. I hope my words will
make
you have a
different
view of me.
I
’m going to introduce myself and my
little
family.

My name is
Danh
. I’m 19 years
old
. I’m living in
Ho Chi Minh city
which has numerous
beautiful
and attractive locations. My family consists of my parents, my younger brother and me. My father is a director of the packaging
company
.
My
mother is an accounting manager at
Vietinbank
.
My
younger brother is a freshman at University of Economics and Finance.

As an extroverted person who want to
show
my personalities with other
people
, there are numerous outdoor activities such as playing sports, having a picnic and
so
on,
especially
hanging out with my friends. Not
only
chatting with them,
but
I
also
enhance my knowledge about social life. We can
dicuss
and give our perspectives in
some
head-aching problems. Beside my activities with my friends, I have a part-time job as a Chemistry tutor for twelfth and two
nineth
graders.

To be honest, I’m a fan of dancing
so
in my leisure time I
usually
practice dancing to burn the calories and
improve
my health,
especially
in this pandemic situation. When I choreograph, I can combine movement and personal feelings to illustrate the content of certain songs.
Besides
self-improvement, I
join
dance clubs like
ArTeam
,
PNDance
to develop myself and made friends with the same passion.

I
am blessed
to have such a loving and caring family and I hope we can
also
be one during my stay at your
house
.

Love
,

Danh
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IELTS letter You are in an au-pair program and you will meet up with your host family very soon.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
278 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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