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You attended an intensive Spanish course but you were dissatisfied with it. Using the advertisement and the notes you made, write a letter to complain about the course. (120 -180 words)

You attended an intensive Spanish course but you were dissatisfied with it. Using the advertisement and the notes you made, write a letter to complain about the course. (120 -180 words) WnBRW

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the rapid Spanish course I took in early October. I saw it advertised on a website about learning. First of all, the Spanish family I was with was very rude and racist. They make fun of me because I'm Asian and I'm Asian. Their skin color is different from theirs. Second, the advertisement says that we will have an intensive grammar course and a debate to improve our pronunciation and communication skills. But in fact, I was only taught to do my homework in grammar. The teacher's attitude is not good either. The teacher only taught basic grammar without answering my questions. The teacher is not at all. It's as experienced as the commercial says. Finally, you make a trip to the city museum. But at the last minute, I was informed that the trip had been canceled! Even though I paid well, I didn't get a refund. Even though the trip was canceled. I believe I should be reimbursed in full for my big disappointment. I hope you will look into the matter and give me an immediate reply. Yours faithfully,

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the rapid Spanish course I took in early October. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 it advertised on a website about learning.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, the Spanish family I was with was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 rude and racist. They This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 fun of me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I'm Asian and I'm Asian. Their skin color is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 from theirs.

Second, the advertisement says that we will have an intensive grammar course and a debate to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 our pronunciation and communication This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 in fact, I was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 taught to do my homework in grammar. The teacher's attitude is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 either. The teacher This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 taught basic grammar without answering my questions. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 teacher is not at all. It's as experienced as the commercial says.

Finally
, you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a trip to the city museum. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 at the last minute, I was informed
 that the trip had been canceled
! Even though
 I paid well, I didn't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a refund. “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Even though
 the trip was canceled
.

I believe I should be reimbursed
 in full for my This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 disappointment. I hope you will look into the matter and give me an immediate reply.

Yours faithfully
, 