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You have a meeting with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you are going to discuss in the meeting.

You have a meeting with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you are going to discuss in the meeting. 151jX
Dear Mr. Dutta, I am writing to let you know the agenda of our tomorrow’s meeting at 3: 00 pm in conference room ‘Haru’. During the meeting, we can discuss my previous year's accomplishments, recommendations and training requirements for the team. I would like to present brief explanations about each of these points in the upcoming sections of my letter. My past year has been fruitful as I lead our 50-member team to deliver the ‘Glob android app’ project to our most prestigious client ‘Sakura’ on time and with zero defects. Additionally, because of the client’s trust and relationship with me, I was able to convince them to employ us in building another app for food delivery services. So, I was instrumental in building the company’s reputation and growth. Since we have a new project I would like to offer my suggestion to hire new people in the domains of JAVA and Angular-JS. While these skills are required at a later stage of the new project but hiring them now will help up to implement enhancements in the previous ‘Glob android app’ project. As the team is expanding, we would need to manage the team in an efficient manner; for this, we would need Agile methodology training. We could discuss this in-depth in our meeting on which modules we should be trained and candidates for each of these modules. Looking forward to having a constructive discourse tomorrow. Yours sincerely, Deb
Dear Mr.
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Dutta
,

I am writing to
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let
you know the agenda of our tomorrow’s meeting at 3: 00 pm in conference room ‘
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Haru
’. During the meeting, we can discuss my previous year's accomplishments, recommendations and training requirements for the
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team
. I would like to present brief explanations about each of these points in the upcoming sections of my letter.

My past year has been fruitful as I lead our 50-member
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
team
to deliver the ‘Glob android app’ project to our most prestigious client ‘
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Sakura
’ on time and with zero defects.
Additionally
,
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because
of the client’s trust and relationship with me, I was able to convince them to employ us in building another app for food delivery services.
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So
, I was instrumental in building the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
’s reputation and growth.

Since we have a new project I would like to offer my suggestion to hire new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in the domains of JAVA and Angular-JS. While these
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
are required
at a later stage of the new project
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
hiring them
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
will
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help
up to implement enhancements in the previous ‘Glob android app’ project.

As the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
team
is expanding, we would need to manage the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
team
Consider replacing "in an efficient manner" with the adverb for "efficient"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in an efficient manner
; for this, we would need Agile methodology training. We could discuss this in-depth in our meeting on which modules we should
be trained
and candidates for each of these modules.

Looking forward to having a constructive discourse tomorrow.

Yours
sincerely
,

Deb
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IELTS letter You have a meeting with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you are going to discuss in the meeting.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
239 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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