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find the accommodation in foreign country

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Dear sir or madam, I am writing this letter to get some details about the accommodation in surrey. I know your agency will help me to find out the best place where I get all the facilities which I need. I choose the University of Fraser Valley for my further study so, I take a one-year business diploma. My classes will start on September 02, 2021. I will stay there with my friends who also choose the same course, so we need two-room private accommodation with some common facilities like a kitchen, heat, two washrooms, furniture and so on. I am also thinking if I will my living place near the shopping mall, grocery store and many more shops which is easy for me to go over there by walk. My budget for the accommodation will be $1500 ( includes all the facilities). I hope you will help me to find out the best place for us and we will arrive over there on August 26, 2021, so, before that, we will choose our apartment. I am waiting for your response. Yours faithfullyRamandeep Kaur

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faithfullyRamandeep
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