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You have a friend who lives abroad and you would like to do a course at one of the colleges in this city.Write a letter to your friend asking for an advice and assistance in contacting in appropriate college.

You have a friend who lives abroad and you would like to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write a letter to your friend asking for an advice and assistance in contacting in appropriate college. qV82a
Dear Johnny Depp, I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice about suitable college with courses on IT sphere. As I am going to apply for a company that takes part in numerous scientific projects, specifically on aero space computer engineering. Therefore, possessing computer programming highly recommendable. I am ultimately interested in being a member of the company. Unfortunately, my bachelor degree on space physics is sole element which doesn't allow me apply for this company. It would be of great help if you could advise me on finding appropriate college, which offers computer engineering courses with positive feedback. And I would be grateful you could share your assistance with your advice as soon as possible. Yours, faithfully. Harry Kane.
Dear Johnny Depp, I would appreciate it if you could give me
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some
advice about suitable college with courses on IT sphere. As I am going to apply for a
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company
that
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takes part
in numerous scientific projects,
specifically
on aero space computer engineering.
Therefore
, possessing computer programming
highly
recommendable. I am
ultimately
interested in being a member of the
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company
. Unfortunately, my bachelor degree on space physics is sole element which doesn't
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allow
me apply for this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. It would be of great
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
if you could advise me on finding appropriate college, which offers computer engineering courses with
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positive
feedback. And I would be grateful you could share your assistance with your advice as
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soon
as possible. Yours,
faithfully
. Harry Kane.

IELTS letter You have a friend who lives abroad and you would like to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write a letter to your friend asking for an advice and assistance in contacting in appropriate college.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
123 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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