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Letter to attended to one of the best colleges in New York city.

Letter to attended to one of the best colleges in New York city. oRLeX
Hello, Sarah How are you? I am so glad hearing that you are being attended to one of the best colleges in New York city. I am writing to ask for your advice about studying abroad. It would be great if you recommended me a nice college or a list of colleges so that I could choose a good one. I would like to learn specific education from English and I want to improve my favourite language. I am planning a language college which subjects especially languages, are specialized there. In future, I am going to be an international interpreter and I think, studying at a specialized college will help me to achieve my goals. What do you think I should do? Please, write me soon. Your sincerely Larah Craft
Hello, Sarah How are you? I am
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so
glad hearing that you are
being attended
to one of the best colleges in
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.
New York city
. I am writing to
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ask for
your advice about studying abroad. It would be great if you recommended me a nice college or a list of colleges
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so
that I could choose a
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good
one. I would like to learn specific education from English and I want to
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improve
my
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favourite
language. I am planning a language college which subjects
especially
languages,
are specialized
there.
Did you mean: "In the future"?
In future
, I am going to be an international interpreter and I
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think
, studying at a specialized college will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to achieve my goals. What do you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
I should do?
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Please
, write me
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soon
. Your
sincerely
Possible spelling mistake found.
Larah
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Craft
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IELTS letter Letter to attended to one of the best colleges in New York city.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
129 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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