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MISSING PRIZE MONEY WON IN DANCE AT YOUTH FEST

MISSING PRIZE MONEY WON IN DANCE AT YOUTH FEST WylDW
SIR, I AM WRITING TO INFORM YOU THAT I HAD ATTENDED THE YOUTH FESTIVAL IN YOUR UNIVERSITY AND PARTICIPATED IN DANCE COMPETITION WHERE, I REPRESENTED MY COLLEGE AND WON SECOND PRISE. AFTER MY PERFORMANCE, WHEN WE RETURNTED TO COLLEGE, WE FOUND THAT OUR PRICE MONEY WAS MISSING IN THE ENVELOPE. ON THE STAGE WHEN THE PRIZE WAS ANNOUNCED AND IT WAS HANDED OVER TO OUR CAPTAIN AND HE CINFIRMED THAT HE DIDNT CHECKED WHEN, HE RECIEVED IT. I WANT YOU TO CHECK WITH THE ORGANISER IS THERE ANY SORT OF CONFUSION.
SIR, I AM WRITING TO INFORM YOU THAT I HAD ATTENDED THE YOUTH FESTIVAL IN YOUR UNIVERSITY AND PARTICIPATED IN DANCE COMPETITION WHERE, I REPRESENTED MY COLLEGE AND WON SECOND
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PRISE
. AFTER MY PERFORMANCE, WHEN WE
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RETURNTED
TO COLLEGE, WE FOUND THAT OUR PRICE MONEY WAS MISSING IN THE ENVELOPE. ON THE STAGE WHEN THE PRIZE
WAS ANNOUNCED
AND IT
WAS HANDED
OVER TO OUR CAPTAIN AND HE
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CINFIRMED
THAT HE DIDNT
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CHECKED
WHEN, HE
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RECIEVED
IT. I WANT YOU TO
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CHECK
WITH THE
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ORGANISER
IS THERE ANY SORT OF CONFUSION.
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IELTS letter MISSING PRIZE MONEY WON IN DANCE AT YOUTH FEST

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1 paragraphs
91 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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