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email for a friend that show my steps for getting for IELTS EXAM

email for a friend that show my steps for getting for IELTS EXAM L31j8
Dear max Hope this email finds you well I would like to thank you for your concern, I am doing great with the preparation as I started to collect all the needed material for the study, beginning with the weakest point which is the writing I did some researches and found out that I need to upgrade my vocabulary and grammar in order to get a variety of words and stop repeating it, also focusing on watching and write back the news, articles, magazine. While my writing fonts enhanced and speed increased, though I found some troubles with the spelling but am working on it. For speaking, despite feeling shy when talking in English, but I found it easy after practicing with my friends and coworker. Meanwhile, I still found issues in listening especially if the speaker is talking fast, more practice will be great also I just started listening to prod cast and with different speakers, I can say it will go well in the future. For me, the time element is the most difficult thing that is afraid I will not be able to manage it easily, in the reading section I noticed that I have had been over the schedule of the time due to many reasons, one of them is that when the subject of the text is full of knowledge I start to wonder and think how that even possible especially if it shows the percentage in comparing thing. Overall I think I will do my best and wish for good results. Regards
Dear max

Hope this email finds you well

I would like to thank you for your concern, I am doing great with the preparation as I
started
to collect all the needed material for the study, beginning with the weakest point which is the writing I did
some
researches and
found
out that I need to upgrade my vocabulary and grammar in order to
get
a variety of words and
stop
repeating it,
also
focusing on watching and write back the news, articles, magazine.

While my writing fonts enhanced and speed increased, though I
found
some
troubles with the spelling
but
am
working on it. For speaking, despite feeling shy when talking in English,
but
I
found
it easy after practicing with my friends and coworker. Meanwhile, I
still
found
issues in listening
especially
if the speaker is talking
fast
, more practice will be great
also
I
just
started
listening to prod cast and with
different
speakers, I can say it will go well in the future.

For me, the time element is the most difficult thing
that is
afraid I will not be able to manage it
easily
, in the reading section I noticed that I have had been over the schedule of the time due to
many
reasons, one of them is that when the subject of the text is full of knowledge I
start
to wonder and
think
how that even possible
especially
if it
shows
the percentage in comparing thing.
Overall
I
think
I will do my best and wish for
good
results.

Regards
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IELTS letter email for a friend that show my steps for getting for IELTS EXAM

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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