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Dear GoPro, I am writing this email to complain about a purchase I made last week. I acquired one of your cameras, specifically the GoPro Hero 3+. However, the functionality of the camera does not fit the specifications stated on your website. According to the detailed description of the website, the camera provides a connection between mobile devices and the device itself in a range of 50 metres. Nonetheless, while using the camera in the forest yesterday to record Canadian wildlife, my connectivity was lost after 32 metres. In order to solve this issue, I kindly request the exchange of this camera for one that meets the requirements detailed on your website. I am a loyal customer of GoPro since I acquired my first camera (GoPro HERO) three years ago. I would really appreciate your prompt attention to this matter, which would allow me to continue enjoying such an amazing product. Best regards, Andres
Dear GoPro,

I am writing this email to complain about a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
I made last week. I acquired one of your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cameras
,
specifically
the GoPro Hero 3+.
However
, the functionality of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
camera
does not fit the specifications stated on your website.

According to the detailed description of the website, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
camera
provides a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
connection between
mobile devices and the device itself in a range of 50
Possible spelling mistake. 'metres' is British English.
metres
. Nonetheless, while using the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
camera
in the forest yesterday to record Canadian wildlife, my connectivity
was lost
after 32
Possible spelling mistake. 'metres' is British English.
metres
.

In order to solve this issue, I kindly request the exchange of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
camera
for one that meets the requirements detailed on your website.

I am a loyal customer of GoPro since I acquired my
first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
camera
(GoPro HERO) three years ago. I would
really
appreciate your prompt attention to this matter, which would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to continue enjoying such an amazing product.

Best regards,

Andres
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IELTS letter email about a defective purchase

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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