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Dear GoPro, I am writing this email to complain about a purchase I made last week. I acquired one of your cameras, specifically the GoPro Hero 3+. However, the functionality of the camera does not fit the specifications stated on your website. According to the detailed description of the website, the camera provides a connection between mobile devices and the device itself in a range of 50 metres. Nonetheless, while using the camera in the forest yesterday to record Canadian wildlife, my connectivity was lost after 32 metres. In order to solve this issue, I kindly request the exchange of this camera for one that meets the requirements detailed on your website. I am a loyal customer of GoPro since I acquired my first camera (GoPro HERO) three years ago. I would really appreciate your prompt attention to this matter, which would allow me to continue enjoying such an amazing product. Best regards, Andres

Dear GoPro,

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In order to solve this issue, I kindly request the exchange of this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
 for one that meets the requirements detailed on your website.

I am a loyal customer of GoPro since I acquired my first
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camera
 (GoPro HERO) three years ago. I would really
 appreciate your prompt attention to this matter, which would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to continue enjoying such an amazing product.

Best regards,

Andres