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you had an appointment with the manager of a bank and now you realized that you can't make it for that. Write a letter to the manager

you had an appointment with the manager of a bank and now you realized that you can't make it for that. Write a letter to the manager 950bj
Dear Mr. Singh, I am writing this letter to apologize for inconvenience as I would not be able to attend the meeting on 25th January 2021 regarding the home loan at 1: 00 pm. My name is Hensy Patel and my reference no. of meeting is 2365. I remember that you schedule a meeting with me on my special request but I have a medical emergency and going out of station in that week. My mother had a chest pain before couple of days and her surgery has been fixed on 24th January 2021 in Delhi, so I have to be with her around 1 week and therefore, have canceled all the appointments for that week. Well, it will be great if you can re-schedule my appointment with you after 3rd May 2021. You can send me conformation for appointment via E-mail - hensypatel8811@gmail. com or contact me on 22********* for any further details. Thank you for your time and apology for inconvenience, waiting to hear from you soon regarding appointment. Yours Sincerely, Hensy Patel
Dear Mr. Singh,

I am writing this letter to apologize for inconvenience as I would not be able to attend the meeting on 25th January 2021 regarding the home loan at 1: 00 pm. My name is
Hensy
Patel and my reference no. of meeting is 2365. I remember that you schedule a meeting with me on my special request
but
I have a medical emergency and going out of station in that week.

My mother had a chest pain
before
couple of
days and her surgery has been
fixed
on 24th January 2021 in Delhi,
so
I
have to
be with her around 1 week and
therefore
, have canceled all the appointments for that week. Well, it will be great if you can re-schedule my appointment with you after 3rd May 2021. You can
send
me conformation for appointment via E-mail
-
hensypatel8811@gmail.
com
or contact me on 22********* for any
further
details
.

Thank you for your time and apology for inconvenience, waiting to hear from you
soon
regarding appointment.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Hensy
Patel
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IELTS letter you had an appointment with the manager of a bank and now you realized that you can't make it for that. Write a letter to the manager

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  American English
6 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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