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Hi ilhom hope all is good I am flying to Tashkent this Saturday for work but will be staying in a hotel for the weekend to take in some sights what do you recommend I know you have lived in this city for many years so I'm keen on to get your opinion and really interested in local culture music and food my hotel is on the outskirts of the city so perhaps some travel advice would be useful to

Hi ilhom hope all is good I am flying to Tashkent this Saturday for work but will be staying in a hotel for the weekend to take in some sights what do you recommend I know you have lived in this city for many years so I'm keen on to get your opinion and really interested in local culture music and food my hotel is on the outskirts of the city so perhaps some travel advice would be useful to 25pBb
Dear Nick sorry for not being in touch for so long I am very happy for your coming however I'm not in Tashkent these days if I were I would exactly travel with you as you asked Tashkent is very good place to travel I think I can give you some advice for traveling firstly as you said you want to know about local culture in Crystal Lake on Sunday it's going to happen our national holiday now bruised it will occur at the emergent layer Square where you can find all information about our culture our initial dances Camille's people will tell you all about our culture Taken 3 if you have more weeks to travel you can also know about our national music because every 4-year in samarqand will be big music festival with called shelter on an errand there will be only sessions from all regions if you go you will be known all about our music certainly I strongly advise you to go Emily town that restaurant enchiladas are district there they they have all our nation music take care of
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IELTS letter Hi ilhom hope all is good I am flying to Tashkent this Saturday for work but will be staying in a hotel for the weekend to take in some sights what do you recommend I know you have lived in this city for many years so I'm keen on to get your opinion and really interested in local culture music and food my hotel is on the outskirts of the city so perhaps some travel advice would be useful to

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