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you have lived in an apartment for a year and your landlord wants to increase the rent. You are not happy with it. Write a letter to the landlord

you have lived in an apartment for a year and your landlord wants to increase the rent. You are not happy with it. Write a letter to the landlord mWja8

Dear Mr. Singh, I am writing this letter as I am disappointed with your decision of increasing the rent. My name is Hensy Patel and I am living at 9th floor of SkyLine, apt no. 911. I am your working tenant living here since 1 year and working as a Manager at Walmart. Me and other tenants living in the building received a letter from you last night about increasing the rent to 35%. Well, every year you increase about 5% and no one complains you about it because we know that you provide us a better service. Unfortunately, this time it is not fair to increase the rent to 35% because it makes it 45, 000 a month. Usually, the average rent of the area is 30, 000 so none of the tenants will be willing to pay this high rent. I would like to advice you that you can increase the rent to 5% as the construction of building is getting older and there are several repairs which people do every other month. After all if you still decide to increase the rent then I would like to break my lease and pay 5, 000 penalty as per the agreement. Not only me, there are several other tenants looking to do the same. Hope you consider this matter serious and get back to tenants with some changes. Yours Sincerely, Hensy Patel

Dear Mr. Singh,

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rent
 to 35%.

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tenants
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. I would like to advice you that you can You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentraisemergerhikeriseupsurge
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 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtariffrentalpaymentlease
rent
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increase
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rent
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penalty
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 me, there are several other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdwellerresidentoccupantrenterinhabitantholder
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 looking to do the same.

Hope you consider this matter serious and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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tenants
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some
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changes
.

Yours Sincerely
,

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Hensy
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