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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to seek inforamtion for scholarship and finacial aid provided by the college. I am studing at Green Pines College, Master of Science program, 1st year. I learnt that hostel facility provided by the collage is currently not available due the maintanance work. Due to this I have to move to rented apartment. It costs significatly higher then the hostel. In addition, I have opted for the supplimentory course on Linux. These has added additional finacial burden upon me. Hence, I am seeking information for scholarship and finacial help provided by the institute. I would like to receive the inforamtion over email. The details needed are mention as following. 1) What is scholarship amount provided? 2) When student should pay the amount back? 3) What is the eligibility criteria? 4) Is there any interest charges? 5) Can a student work insted of paying it back? I am looking forward to receive the inforation from your side at earliest. Yours Sincerly, Aleem Shaikh
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to seek
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inforamtion
for scholarship and
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finacial
aid
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provided
by the college.

I am
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studing
at Green Pines College, Master of Science program, 1st year.
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I
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learnt
that hostel facility
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provided
by the collage is
currently
not available due the
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maintanance
work. Due to this I
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have to
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move
to rented apartment. It costs
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significatly
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higher then
the hostel.
In addition
, I have opted for the
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supplimentory
course on Linux.
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These has
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added
additional
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finacial
burden upon me.
Hence
, I am seeking information for scholarship and
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finacial
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help
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provided
by the institute. I would like to receive the
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inforamtion
over email.

The
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details
needed are mention as following.

1) What is scholarship amount
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provided? 2)
When student should pay the amount back?

3) What is the eligibility criteria?

4) Is there any interest charges?

5) Can a student work
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insted
of paying it back?

I am looking forward
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to receive
the
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inforation
from your side at earliest.

Yours
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Sincerly
,

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Aleem
Shaikh

IELTS letter Seeking information letter

Letter
  American English
12 paragraphs
167 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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