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Seeking information letter

Seeking information letter 06KB9

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to seek inforamtion for scholarship and finacial aid provided by the college. I am studing at Green Pines College, Master of Science program, 1st year. I learnt that hostel facility provided by the collage is currently not available due the maintanance work. Due to this I have to move to rented apartment. It costs significatly higher then the hostel. In addition, I have opted for the supplimentory course on Linux. These has added additional finacial burden upon me. Hence, I am seeking information for scholarship and finacial help provided by the institute. I would like to receive the inforamtion over email. The details needed are mention as following. 1) What is scholarship amount provided? 2) When student should pay the amount back? 3) What is the eligibility criteria? 4) Is there any interest charges? 5) Can a student work insted of paying it back? I am looking forward to receive the inforation from your side at earliest. Yours Sincerly, Aleem Shaikh

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to seek Possible spelling mistake found.information
inforamtion
 for scholarship and Possible spelling mistake found.financial
finacial
 aid You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgivecontributeadministerbringequiphand over
provided
 by the college.

I am Possible spelling mistake found.studyingstudding
studing
 at Green Pines College, Master of Science program, 1st year. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.learned
learnt
 that hostel facility You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgivecontributeadministerbringequiphand over
provided
 by the collage is currently
 not available due the Possible spelling mistake found.maintenance
maintanance
 work. Due to this I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to rented apartment. It costs Possible spelling mistake found.significantly
significatly
Did you mean "higher than"?higher than
higher then
 the hostel. In addition
, I have opted for the Possible spelling mistake found.supplementary
supplimentory
 course on Linux. The verb 'has' is singular. Did you mean: "This has" or "These have", "These haven"?This hasThese haveThese haven
These has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 additional Possible spelling mistake found.financial
finacial
 burden upon me. Hence
, I am seeking information for scholarship and Possible spelling mistake found.financial
finacial
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgivecontributeadministerbringequiphand over
provided
 by the institute. I would like to receive the Possible spelling mistake found.information
inforamtion
 over email.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 needed are mention as following.

1) What is scholarship amount You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgivecontributeadministerbringequiphand over
provided?

2)
 When student should pay the amount back?

3) What is the eligibility criteria?

4) Is there any interest charges?

5) Can a student work Possible spelling mistake found.insteadinstepins ted
insted
 of paying it back?

I am looking forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to receiving".to receiving
to receive
 the Possible spelling mistake found.informationinf orationinfo ration
inforation
 from your side at earliest.

Yours Possible spelling mistake found.Sincerely
Sincerly
,

Possible spelling mistake found.Ale emAzeem
Aleem
 Shaikh