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You are looking for a job at a football club. Write a letter to the manager of the football club.

You are looking for a job at a football club. Write a letter to the manager of the football club. jdLd1
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to apply for a job of sport master which I saw advertise in Today's magazine. I am 27 years old and obtained Bachelor's degree in 2009. I hope I feel many important qualifications needs for your job. I am presently working as sport master in the department Kesh sport master. I have been for the last six years. In addition I am member of "Paxtakor" football club and our team often go to play football every region. However, I do kurash very well which preparing to children in the battle. I am proactive and able to handle multiple task sumeltoneusly. I am currently looking for position that will allow me to devolop my skills and experience. I enjoy several outdoor activities such as planting trees and flowers. I am sociable and I can get on well with new people easily. If you would like me to attend me an interview, I would be able to come any time convinient to you as I do want to be a member your sport club. I look forward to hearing as soon as possible. Your faithfully John Adams.
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to apply for a job of
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sport
master which I
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saw
advertise in
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Today
's magazine. I am 27 years
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old
and obtained Bachelor's degree in 2009. I hope I feel
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many
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important
qualifications needs for your job.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am
presently
working as
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sport
master in the department
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Kesh
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sport
master.
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I
have been for the last six years. In
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addition I
am member of
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"
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Paxtakor
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"
football club and our team
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often
go to play football every region.
However
, I do
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kurash
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very
well which preparing to children in the battle. I am proactive and able to handle multiple task
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sumeltoneusly
. I am
currently
looking for position that will
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allow
me to
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devolop
my
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skills
and experience.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
enjoy several outdoor activities such as planting trees and flowers.
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I
am sociable and I can
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get
on well with new
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people
easily
. If you
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would like
me to attend me an interview, I would be able to
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come
any time
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convinient
to you as I do want to be a member your
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sport
club. I look forward to hearing as
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soon
as possible. Your
faithfully
John Adams.
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IELTS letter You are looking for a job at a football club. Write a letter to the manager of the football club.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
190 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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