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You work international company. You have seen advertisement for a training course which will be useful for you job. Write a letter to your manager.

You work international company. You have seen advertisement for a training course which will be useful for you job. Write a letter to your manager. EpgyL
Dear Madam I am writing to inform you about the training course, which titled “CEFR B2 and C1” course. I saw this advert last week on the telegram channel. I believe this crash will help me to pass CEFR testing skills and greatly benefit our upcoming testing project. In addition, right now it is necessary for our company. Because we have not got enough workers with certificate like CEFR. I believe it would be helpful for me and I am hoping to get your permission to participate in it. I am looking to join 2 months course. I enquired about course details, and I found that will be able to learn advanced level skills in CEFR testing. I hope the company will be able to provide me with funding for this course because this workshop is quite costly. I would not able to pay the full fee, and therefore, I believe the organization’s management team can give me financial assistance. After I finish the course, sure pass the CEFR tests and will get the certificate which will be better for our company. Whenever we have not got enough workers with advanced level certificate. I am looking forward to a positive response. Yours Sincerely Katya.
Dear Madam

I am writing to inform you about the training
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course
, which titled “CEFR B2 and C1”
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course
. I
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saw
this advert last week on the telegram channel.
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I
believe this crash will
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help
me to pass CEFR testing
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skills
and
greatly
benefit our upcoming testing project.
In addition
, right
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now
it is necessary for our
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company
.
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Because
we have not
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got
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enough
workers with certificate like CEFR. I believe it would be helpful for
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me and
I am hoping to
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get
your permission to participate in it.

I am looking to
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join
2 months
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course
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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enquired
about
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course
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details
, and I found that will be able to learn advanced level
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skills
in CEFR testing.

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I
hope the
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company
will be able to provide me with funding for this
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course
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because
this workshop is quite costly.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would not able to pay the full fee, and
therefore
, I believe the organization’s management team can give me financial assistance.

After I finish the
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course
, sure pass the CEFR
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tests
and will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the certificate which will be better for our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.
“Whenever” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whenever
we have not
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got
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enough
workers with advanced level certificate.

I am looking forward to a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response.

Yours
Sincerely


Katya.
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IELTS letter You work international company. You have seen advertisement for a training course which will be useful for you job. Write a letter to your manager.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
204 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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