During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. v.5
During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. v. 5
Dear Mr Reynold,
I am Paul Strang, and I am lucky enough to have been introduced with you just a few days ago. Not sure, if you will remember me, but I had an opportunity to talk with you about two weeks ago when we both were travelling by air from Boston to Dallas.
I was sitting next to you, and after we got introduced, we had some interesting conversations. You were kind enough to suggest to me that I should contact you for a possible job position at one of your restaurants. So, here I am, sir, as I would like to apply for a managerial position at your restaurant.
I think that I would be a very suitable candidate for the managerial position in one of your restaurants because I have already worked as an Assistant Human Resource and Payroll Manager for a large and busy residential hotel in my hometown. I have learned a great deal about customers’ needs in the service industry. Besides, I also have a post-graduate diploma in human resource management.
So, based on my credentials and experience, I think, I should be able to render excellent service to your company.
I would very much like to work for your company. I am hoping that you would give me an opportunity to prove my worth.
Yours sincerely,
Paul Strang
Dear Mr Reynold,
I am Paul
Strang
, and I am lucky
enough
to have
been introduced
with you
just
a few days ago. Not sure, if you will remember me,
but
I had an opportunity to talk with you about two weeks ago when we both were travelling by air from Boston to Dallas.
I was sitting
next
to you, and after we
got
introduced, we had
some
interesting conversations. You were kind
enough
to suggest to me that I should contact you for a possible job position at one of your restaurants.
So
, here I am, sir, as I would like to apply for a managerial position at your restaurant.
I
think
that I would be a
very
suitable candidate for the managerial position in one of your restaurants
because
I have already worked as an Assistant Human Resource and Payroll Manager for a large and busy residential hotel in my hometown. I have learned a great deal about customers’ needs in the service industry.
Besides
, I
also
have a post-graduate diploma in human resource management.
So
, based on my credentials and experience, I
think
, I should be able to render excellent service to your
company
.
I would
very
much like to work for your
company
. I am hoping that you would give me an opportunity to prove my worth.
Yours
sincerely
,
Paul
Strang
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes