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During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. He suggested you should contact him for a possible job opportunity. Write a letter to remind him about meeting and your interest in a job and why you think you are suitable.

Dear Sir / Madam, Hope my letter finds you well. This is with reference to the informal discussion we had during our plane journey last month. To remind you exactly, it was on the second Saturday of the previous month. You were returning home after attending the opening ceremony of your recently opened restaurant in Hyderabad. During our conversation, you had mentioned about a possible job opportunity for me in one of your restaurants. I gave it a serious thought and figured out a suitable line of work and designation for me. I would be interested to don the hat of a Guest Manager in your hotel in Mumbai city. I am already supervising a team of fifteen to twenty members, handling different clients and catering to their requirements in my current role of a team leader. With an overall experience of ten years, I have become quite confident of and skilful at people management. I believe my skill set and enthusiasm would make me a right fit for this job. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Manmeet
Dear Sir / Madam,

Hope my letter finds you well. This is with reference to the informal discussion we had during our
plane
journey last month. To remind you exactly, it was on the second Saturday of the previous month. You were returning home after attending the opening ceremony of your recently opened restaurant in Hyderabad.

During our conversation, you had
mentioned about a
possible job opportunity for me in one of your restaurants. I gave it a serious
thought
and figured out a suitable line of work and designation for me. I would
be interested
to don the hat of a Guest Manager in your hotel in Mumbai city.

I
am already supervising a team of fifteen to twenty members, handling
different
clients and catering to their requirements in my
current
role of a team leader. With an
overall
experience of ten years, I have become quite confident of and
skilful
at
people
management. I believe my
skill
set and enthusiasm would
make
me a right fit for this job. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Manmeet
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IELTS letter During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. He suggested you should contact him for a possible job opportunity. Write a letter to remind him about meeting and your interest in a job and why you think you are suitable.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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