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letter to neighbor for the noise coming from the house

letter to neighbor for the noise coming from the house 70B1X
Dear neighbors, I am immensely apologetic for the inconveniences you are getting from me. As I am a DJ Jockey, I need to jumble up the songs, plus need to make remixes of it, moreover, also to understand the sound rhythms of the song frequency which is necessary in an event or program where a DJ is required. Thus, because of that one might be suffering from the noisy music. I am totally understand what you are going through, hence, due to that specific reason, I am shifting as early as possible. I am trying my best to search the new places, where I can stay peacefully and also, let other live as well. So for now instance, I will try my best to play the songs on the low bass and treble so that one need not have to bear the sound amplifications to the ears. As it is ear paining to you, as well as for many other neighbors too. Sorry for the disturbance, yours truly, David Copes
Dear neighbors,

I am
immensely
apologetic for the inconveniences you are getting from me. As I am a DJ Jockey, I need to jumble up the songs, plus need to
make
remixes of it,
moreover
,
also
to understand the sound rhythms of the song frequency which is necessary in an
event
or program where a DJ
is required
.
Thus
,
because
of that one might be suffering from the noisy music.

I am
totally
understand
what you are going through,
hence
, due to that specific reason, I am shifting as early as possible. I am trying my best to search the new places, where I can stay
peacefully
and
also
,
let
other
live
as well
.
So
for
now
instance, I will try my best to play the songs on the low bass and treble
so
that one need not
have to
bear the sound amplifications to the ears. As it is ear paining to you,
as well
as for
many
other neighbors too.

Sorry for the disturbance,

yours
truly
,

David Copes
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IELTS letter letter to neighbor for the noise coming from the house

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
169 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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