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Letter to a friend for missing the party

Letter to a friend for missing the party eeGYB
Hi Aftab, Heard from the grapevine your birthday celebration was a happening event. I am happy the party went well, and all who were present enjoyed it. I bet you missed me! Unfortunately, I was not able to join. I am really sorry for not being there. Since a week before the party, I was preparing myself and was very upset that I, will able to join. On the day I had my aunt come over. She stays alone here, and both her son and daughter reside outside the country. She wanted me to accompany her to the doctor for a check-up. I was not able to negate her request. This came up on the day, and I was embarrassed to inform you and spoil your mood. The day is gone; however, we will continue your birthday celebration. Next weekend let us plan either a trek or a movie followed by a lavish dinner. For dinner, let’s visit the Italian restaurant you love. Looking forward to meeting you and have a funfilled day. Cheers! Sandesh
Hi
Aftab
,

Heard from the grapevine your birthday celebration was a happening
event
. I am happy the party went well, and all who were present enjoyed it. I bet you missed me!

Unfortunately, I was not able to
join
. I am
really
sorry for not being there. Since a week
before
the party, I was preparing myself and was
very
upset that I,
will able
to
join
.

On the day I had my aunt
come
over. She stays alone here, and both her son and daughter reside outside the country. She wanted me to accompany her to the doctor for a
check
-up. I was not able to negate her request. This came up on the day, and I
was embarrassed
to inform you and spoil your mood.

The day
is gone
;
however
, we will continue your birthday celebration.
Next
weekend
let
us plan either a trek or a movie followed by a lavish dinner. For dinner,
let
’s visit the Italian restaurant you
love
.

Looking forward to meeting you and have a
funfilled
day.

Cheers!

Sandesh
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IELTS letter Letter to a friend for missing the party

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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