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You bought a washing machine from a shop. It works unproperly. Write a complaint letter. Give detailed information to the shop manager about the matter ask changing yout purchase

You bought a washing machine from a shop. It works unproperly. Write a complaint letter. Give detailed information to the shop manager about the matter ask changing yout purchase BLMA9
Dear Sir or MadamI am writing to complaint you about a washing machine which i bought from your shop last week. Let me write details all about. I was at your shop and see all your products. After all i found the thing that i was looking for. The shop asistant gave me detailed information and i liked it. I purchased the machine. Everything began after two days. First day the machine worked well and it washed very good. But the second time during the process the washing machine stopped in the middle of work. All my clothes was not cleaned and wet. In addition temperature of water was not as it showed. I want to change the pruduct at the same brand and cost. I hope you will help men in this situation as soon as possible. Yours faithfullyMaria Robertson
Dear Sir or
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MadamI
Did you mean "am I"?
am
writing to complaint you about a washing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
machine
which
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i
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bought
from your shop last week.
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Let
me write
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details
all about. I was at your shop and
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see
all your products.
After all
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i
found the thing that
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
was looking for. The shop
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asistant
gave me detailed information and
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
liked it. I
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purchased
the
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machine
. Everything began after two days.
First
day the
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machine
worked well and it washed
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very
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good
.
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But
the second time during the process the washing
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machine
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stopped
in the middle of work. All my clothes was not cleaned and wet. In
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
addition
temperature of water was not as it
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showed
. I want to
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change
the
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pruduct
at the same brand and cost. I hope you will
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help
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men
in this situation as
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soon
as possible. Yours
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faithfullyMaria
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Robertson
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IELTS letter You bought a washing machine from a shop. It works unproperly. Write a complaint letter. Give detailed information to the shop manager about the matter ask changing yout purchase

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
140 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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