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ello buddy! How are you! I am fine and my job is going on superbly. First of all, a big congrats for the new Clothing company.

ello buddy! How are you! I am fine and my job is going on superbly. First of all, a big congrats for the new Clothing company. kYWB8
Dear Alan, Hello buddy! How are you! I am fine and my job is going on superbly. First of all, a big congrats for the new Clothing company. As you mentioned that you have just set up the manufacturing plant in Dubai last week, you need some help of mine regarding finding the good quality of thread and colour pigment. Well, I want to tell you that the superior quality of these products are manufactured by my company Vardhman whose headquarter is situated in Gurgaon India. You can send your quotation on email service@vardhman. co. in or you can even contact the sales department on a landline number 011-2343455. They can also send you the samples which you can verify from your quality assurance team. This deal can be suitable for you because it is very difficult to find economical and high-quality products. Apart from that, this firm can provide exporting facilities without your involvement in custom clearance work. At last, I can also help you with any kind of assistance. Hope you will find my suggestion useful and best of luck for your endeavour. With love, Alex
Dear Alan,

Hello buddy! How are you! I am fine and my job is going on
superbly
.
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First of all
, a
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big
congrats for the new Clothing
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company
.

As you mentioned that you have
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just
set up the manufacturing plant in Dubai last week, you need
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some
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help
of mine regarding finding the
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good
quality of thread and
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colour
pigment. Well, I want to
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tell
you that the superior quality of these products
are manufactured
by my
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company
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Vardhman
whose headquarter
is situated
in Gurgaon India.

You can
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send
your quotation on email
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service@vardhman
.
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co
. in or you can even contact the sales department on a landline number 011-2343455. They can
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
you the samples which you can verify from your quality assurance team.

This deal can be suitable for you
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because
it is
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very
difficult to find economical and high-quality products. Apart from that, this firm can provide exporting facilities without your involvement in custom clearance work. At last, I can
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you with any kind of assistance.

Hope you will find my suggestion useful and best of luck for your
Possible spelling mistake. 'endeavour' is British English.
endeavour
.

With
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love
,

Alex
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IELTS letter ello buddy! How are you! I am fine and my job is going on superbly. First of all, a big congrats for the new Clothing company.

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