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Describe a day when you thought the weather was perfect

Today I’m going to talk about a day when I thought the weather was just too excellent. I experienced such a perfect day about a few months ago when I decided to take a walk outside of my house on fine summer evening. By that time, the sun had very died down and I smelt the soil around me. The temperature was so pleasant that I didn’t want to step inside. A very gentle breeze was also blowing past my ears to offer me even more fresh feeling around me. I though the weather was perfect on that day because it made me feel very alive and energetic. I probably had walked for almost 2 hours and yet never felt a hint of tiredness in me. It felt perfect also because the nature around me on that day was so fresh

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
 I’m going to talk about a day when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 the weather was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 too excellent.

I experienced such a perfect day about a few months ago when I decided to take a walk This phrase is redundant. Consider using “outside”.outside
outside of
 my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 on fine summer evening.

By that time, the sun had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :passed away
died
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).down, and
down and
 I smelt Consider using “the surrounding soil”.the surrounding soil
the soil around me
.

The temperature was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 pleasant that I didn’t want to step inside.

A This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 gentle breeze was also
 blowing past my ears to offer me even more fresh feeling around me.

I though the weather was perfect on that day This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it made me feel This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 alive and energetic.

I probably
 had walked for almost 2 hours and yet
 never felt a hint of tiredness in me.

It felt perfect also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
Consider using “the surrounding nature”.the surrounding nature
the nature around me
 on that day was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 fresh