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your friend thnking of going for a camping holiday. advice him why he/she will enjoy, decsribe possible disadvantages, say whether you will join or not

Dear Junglee Jawaani, Hope you are doing well. I understand that you need some suggestions to plan your first trip of vacation camping for this summer. As in know you for the past few years, you will be enjoying the scenic beauty of the residing area where the tent will be setup. You can enjoy the sun setting time with the barbecue and couple of glass of chilled wine. Even though it is hot season, on the contrary temperature drops to a quiet chilling condition during the night time, you can avail the advantages of sunny and coolness. To alert you, about some negative facts for which you need to be prepared. There will be the chances of insects and reptiles. You have to carry enough amount of fuel for light at night. Mobile network won’t be available in whole of the camping area. This particular place, beside the river is a great and calm place for tenting, I would like to stick with you to go for this rejuvenating outdoor stay. I will call you to chit-chat about the preparations. I am looking forward towards an awful trip with you. Yours lovingly, Elango
Dear
Junglee
Jawaani
,

Hope you are doing well.

I understand that you need
some
suggestions to plan your
first
trip of vacation camping for this summer.

As in know you for the past few years, you will be enjoying the scenic beauty of the residing area where the tent will be setup. You can enjoy the sun setting time with the barbecue and couple of glass of chilled wine.

Even though
it is hot season,
on the contrary
temperature drops to a quiet chilling condition during the
night time
, you can avail the advantages of sunny and coolness.

To alert you, about
some
negative
facts for which you need to
be prepared
. There will be the chances of insects and reptiles. You
have to
carry
enough
amount of fuel for light at night. Mobile network won’t be available in whole of the camping area.

This particular place, beside the river is a great and calm place for tenting, I would like to stick with you to go for this rejuvenating outdoor stay. I will call you to chit-chat about the preparations.

I am looking forward towards an awful trip with you.

Yours
lovingly
,

Elango
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IELTS letter your friend thnking of going for a camping holiday. advice him why he/she will enjoy, decsribe possible disadvantages, say whether you will join or not

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  American English
10 paragraphs
193 words
5.5
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