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A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject.Write a letter to your friend.In your letter give details of the course you took at the university,explain why you recommend the university,give some advice about how to apply

Dear Jennie, How are you doing? I’m so excited to share my experience about the course that I did in Anna University. As you know, I took Mechatronics Engineering and the duration is for four years. This course covers both mechanical and electronic core subjects, so you can learn a lot about automation, robotics that will be very interesting. There are a number of job opportunities emerging all over the world on this field. I strongly recommend you to apply in this university because it has a plethora of lab facilities on robotics, CNC, hydraulics and many more with good infrastructure. The staffs are having very good knowledge on the subjects. There are few other colleges offering the same course but as per my research they don’t have the facility as good as Anna University. The application forms are available on the website annauniv. edu. You have to submit this form online before the dead line. Then you will be informed through email about admission procedures. Let me know if you have any other doubts. Take care! With love, Sugi
Dear Jennie,

How are you doing? I’m
so
excited to share my experience about the course that I did in Anna University. As you know, I took Mechatronics Engineering and the duration is for four years. This course covers both mechanical and electronic core subjects,
so
you can learn a lot about automation, robotics that will be
very
interesting. There are a number of job opportunities emerging all over the world on this field.

I
strongly
recommend you to apply in this university
because
it has a plethora of lab facilities on robotics, CNC, hydraulics and
many
more with
good
infrastructure. The staffs are having
very
good
knowledge on the subjects. There are few other colleges offering the same course
but
as per my research they don’t have the facility as
good
as Anna University.

The application forms are available on the website
annauniv
.
edu
. You
have to
submit this form online
before
the
dead line
. Then you will
be informed
through email about admission procedures.
Let
me know if you have any other doubts. Take care!

With
love
,

Sugi
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give details of the course you took at the university, explain why you recommend the university, give some advice about how to apply

Letter
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179 words
6.0
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