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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, -Explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery -Explain the importance of this delivery -Ask for a replacement item to be sent Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am Vivian Kim. I am writing a letter to complain about the delivery with missing items. My order number is BV23515. I placed the order for three items, they are one piece of flower eyeshadow palette, one piece of brown mascara and one piece of black eyebrow powder. I received the parcel yesterday and found that the eyebrow powder was not in the box. The copy of receipt is attached in this letter. I felt disappointed about the order and this is the first time to purchase on your website. The order is for birthday present for my cousin and her birthday is on 28th November. I hope she can receive before her birthday. Can you please let me know when the item will be sent? Please also provide the tracking number after despatch. I am looking forward for your reply. Yours faithfully, Vivian Kim
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Vivian Kim. I am writing a letter to complain about the delivery with missing items.

My
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
order
number is BV23515. I placed the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
order
for three items, they are one piece of flower eyeshadow palette, one piece of brown mascara and one piece of black eyebrow powder. I received the parcel yesterday and found that the eyebrow powder was not in the box. The copy of receipt
is attached
in this letter.

I felt disappointed about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
order
and this is the
first
time to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
on your website. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
order
is for birthday present for my cousin and her birthday is on 28th November. I hope she can receive
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
her birthday. Can you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know when the item will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
?
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
also
provide the tracking number after despatch.

I am looking forward for your reply.

Yours
faithfully
,

Vivian Kim

IELTS letter You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, -Explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery -Explain the importance of this delivery -Ask for a replacement item to be sent

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  American English
7 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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