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You were watching television and saw a program being shown early in the morning that contained a lot of violence you believe the program is unsuitable for that time of day. Write a letter station in your letter, give your reason for wanting. Explain what you think the problem is with the program. Say what you would like the station manager to do

Dear sir / man, I am waiting to complain about a program that I happened to see on your network a few days ago. I am not sure of the name, but it was being shown at 8am on a Saturday morning and I believe that, It was extremely unsuitable for this time. There was a great deal of violence in the program. Which seemed to relolve around a war of some kind of. The characters, many of whom looked quite young fought using weapons such as swords and knives. Moreover, the violence was quite realistic and there was a great deal of blood. I was horrified that such material would be shown at a time when young children usually watch. I would like to see this program removed for the schedule altogether or moved to a later time slot. I am sure you must have received other complaints from concerned parents, and I hope that you will take action soon about this disturbing issues. I look forward to your response. Your faithfully, Chavan Balaji.

Dear sir / This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
, I am waiting to complain about a program that I happened to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 on your network a few days ago. I am not sure of the name, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it was being shown
 at 8am on a Saturday morning and I believe that, It was extremely
 unsuitable for this time.

There was a great deal of violence in the program. “Which” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Which
 seemed to Possible spelling mistake found.resolverevolve
relolve
 around a war of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 kind of. The characters, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 of whom looked quite young fought using weapons such as swords and knives. Moreover
, the violence was quite realistic and there was a great deal of blood. I was horrified
 that such material would be shown
 at a time when young children usually
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
.

I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 this program removed for the schedule altogether or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to a later time slot. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 am sure you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 have received other complaints from concerned parents, and I hope that you will take action This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 about this disturbing issues.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 look forward to your response.

Did you mean “Yours”? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
faithfully
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Chavan
 Balaji. 