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Dear Uncle! God bless you Hope you will be fine there

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Dear Uncle! God bless you Hope you will be fine there Today was the second class, the teacher has given me a lot of homework which I am doing. The teacher's teaching method is good. She also seems to be very kind and compassionate. Fortunately, she has the qualities that a teacher should have. She has informed me that she has received the fee. I am working as hard as I can, I don't know how much success I will get and what God has written in my destiny. Will my dream ever be fulfilled or not. Dreams are many and life is very short. By contributing to the fulfillment of my dream, the path you have paved for me, and the support you have given me, what can I repay for the insignificant, only God will repay you. Coincidentally, today I was reading Muslim Abdul Aziz Al-Zarmal's book "The Amazing Events of Accepting Prayer" which contains really amazing events about how God made the impossible possible. I hope one day our dream It will be fulfilled and Allah will give us a lot of happiness. I am writing this letter just to express my love and gratitude to you, but to be honest, the word thank you is too short for you. May Allah reward you better and give you lots of happiness. Thank you again for your kindness and love. Your's Muhammad Alamullah, New Delhi
Dear Uncle!

God bless you

Hope you will be fine there

Today
was the second
class
, the teacher has
given
me
a lot of
homework which I am doing. The teacher's teaching method is
good
. She
also
seems to be
very
kind and compassionate.
Fortunately
, she has the qualities that a teacher should have. She has informed me that she has received the fee.

I am working as
hard
as I can, I don't know how much success I will
get
and what God has written in my destiny. Will my
dream
ever
be fulfilled
or not.
Dreams
are
many
and life is
very
short. By contributing to the fulfillment of my
dream
, the path you have paved for me, and the support you have
given
me, what can I repay for the insignificant,
only
God will repay you.

Coincidentally
,
today
I was reading Muslim Abdul Aziz
Al-Zarmal
's book
"
The Amazing
Events
of Accepting Prayer
"
which contains
really
amazing
events
about how God made the impossible possible. I hope one day our
dream
It will
be fulfilled
and Allah will give us
a lot of
happiness.

I am writing this letter
just
to express my
love
and gratitude to you,
but
to be honest, the word thank you
is
too short for you. May Allah reward you better and give you lots of happiness.

Thank you again for your kindness and
love
.

Your's


Muhammad
Alamullah
, New Delhi
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IELTS letter Dear Uncle! God bless you Hope you will be fine there

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
236 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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