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Dear Sir or Madam, Last Monday I ordered a cover for my HTC phone from your eCommerce website.

Dear Sir or Madam, Last Monday I ordered a cover for my HTC phone from your eCommerce website. I was excited when it arrived but very disappointed to find that the product was not as promised and totally unusable. I am hoping you will replace it. In relation to the specifics of the order, I purchased this leather cover through your website called Electric Gadgets on November 08th using my PayPal account. The order number is 2584205 and I am attaching a copy of my receipt with this letter. The issue with the cover is that it is not a genuine leather product and I am unable to store my phone inside it securely. The picture of the item on your website clearly shows the cover supports the HTC Desire 12+ model and is an original leather product. So I’m sure this is a manufacturing flaw. As a solution, and because I really like the design and look of the cover, I am hoping that you will agree to replace it with a new and genuine one for free. Otherwise, I would like a full refund and I will be contacting PayPal complaints if I do not hear back from you in regards to this within a week. Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply soon. Yours faithfully, John Smith

Dear Sir or Madam,

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very
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 unusable. I am hoping you will replace it.

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cover
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 supports the HTC Desire 12+ model and is an original leather product. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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because
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 like the design and look of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlidcanvassheetmaskscreencap
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, I am hoping that you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 to replace it with a new and genuine one for free. Otherwise
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 this within a week.

Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours faithfully
,

John Smith