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Write an appointment letter to a student who applied to do industrial training in your organization

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Dear Francis, With respect to your application letter received on 24th of September, 2019, on your request to have your compulsory training in our organization. This reputable establishment has given you an opportunity to serve for a period of a year. The resumption date of your appointment is 10th of October, 2019 and will be terminated by the 20th of September, 2020. You are entitled to 10 working days annual leave. The office resumes by by 8 am and closes by 4 pm, except on Saturday that open by 9am and closes by 2pm. On resumption, you will undergo orientation training to put through the Do's and Don'ts of the company. Furthermore, you will work directly under my supervision with your job description as follows: Attending to patients in reception of samples and documenting in in-coming register, documenting daily work done according to samples received in their different log books such as urine, swabs, serology and so on, drying of media plates in the oven every morning at a temperature 37 degree C, disinfecting the workbench with 10% Hypochlorite after each day's activities. I believe you will maximize your time and knowledge effectively in this reputable organization. Accept my congratulation once again. Yours faithfully, Obisesan O. L.
Dear Francis,

With respect to your application letter received on 24th of
September, 2019
, on your request to have your compulsory training in our organization. This reputable establishment has
given
you an opportunity to serve for a period of a year.

The resumption date of your appointment is 10th of
October, 2019
and will
be terminated
by the 20th of
September, 2020
. You
are entitled
to 10 working days annual
leave
. The office resumes
by by
8 am and closes by 4 pm, except on Saturday that open by 9am and closes by 2pm.

On resumption, you will undergo orientation training
to put
through the
Do's and Don'ts
of the
company
.
Furthermore
, you will work
directly
under my supervision with your job description as follows:

Attending to patients in reception of samples and documenting in in-coming register, documenting daily work done according to samples received in their
different
log books such as urine, swabs, serology and
so
on, drying of media plates in the oven every morning at a temperature 37 degree C, disinfecting the workbench with 10%
Hypochlorite
after each day's activities.

I believe you will maximize your time and knowledge
effectively
in this reputable organization.

Accept my congratulation once again.

Yours
faithfully
,

Obisesan
O. L.
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IELTS letter Write an appointment letter to a student who applied to do industrial training in your organization

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
207 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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