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Due to availability of infrastructure + requirement clarification, WIll work remotely with the VPN Arrange accommodation and flight tickets

Due to availability of infrastructure + requirement clarification, WIll work remotely with the VPN Arrange accommodation and flight tickets 2bRDj
Dear Mr Simon, I am writing this letter to inform you about the work location change for a period of at least six months. I hope you are aware of our upcoming project details. As we need to start that web development from scratch, I would be a great idea to work from our head office which located in Toronto, Canada. The predominant reason for this is, the availability of infrastructure for our project requirement. In addition to that, for that office only, our solution architecture will come and that would be added advantage for us to clear the doubts. In order to complete my regular responsibilities of the previous product, I would like to work remotely from that area only. I have the Virtual Private Network setup on my laptop, so I can any required server's with this well established network. Additionally, these official duties can be taken care by my colleague also. To execute our upcoming project as we planned I need to travel from India to Canada. It would be great. If you could able to arrange my travel ticket along with the accommodation availability nearby our head office. So that I can reach to workplace without any traffic congestion problem. Looking forward for your kind support to our prestigious product which will give a huge benefit to our company. Yours sincerely, shareef
Dear Mr Simon,

I am writing this letter to inform you about the work location
change
for a period of at least six months.

I hope you are aware of our upcoming project
details
. As we need to
start
that web development from scratch, I would be a great
idea
to work from our head office which located in Toronto, Canada. The predominant reason for this is, the availability of infrastructure for our project requirement.
In addition
to that, for that office
only
, our solution architecture will
come
and that would be
added
advantage for us to
clear
the doubts.

In order to complete my regular responsibilities of the previous product, I would like to work
remotely
from that area
only
. I have the Virtual Private Network setup on my laptop,
so
I can any required server's with this well established network.
Additionally
, these official duties can
be taken
care by my colleague
also
.

To execute our upcoming project as we planned I need to travel from India to Canada. It would be great.
If
you
could able
to arrange my travel ticket along with the accommodation availability nearby our head office.
So that
I can reach to workplace without any traffic congestion problem.

Looking forward for your kind support to our prestigious product which will give a huge benefit to our
company
.

Yours
sincerely
,

shareef
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IELTS letter Due to availability of infrastructure + requirement clarification, WIll work remotely with the VPN Arrange accommodation and flight tickets

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  American English
8 paragraphs
225 words
6.0
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