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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in regard to a recent change in parking regulations made by the council.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in regard to a recent change in parking regulations made by the council. kYX8e
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in regard to a recent change in parking regulations made by the council. My name is Jon Smith, and I live on 89 Northway street. I have been living in London for all my life and I am a resident of Green Temple neighborhood for the last 10 years. Unfortunately, I was recently informed that the parking arrangments in our street have been changed. While in the past parking in the street was permited only to the street's residents, today it is allowed to the entire public. As a result, finding a parking place in our street have become a very challenging job. Often it may take as much as 20 minutes to find a parking place, therefor, causing us significant inconvenience. Thus, I believe that the council should return the regulation to their original form. As I am aware to the parking problems in the area I recommend that the council should consider using the open land space off Church street as a public parking lot. I hope to hear from you in the near future, Your Faithfully, Jon Smith
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in regard to a recent
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regulations made by the council.

My name is Jon Smith, and I
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live
on 89 Northway
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. I have been living in London for all my
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life and
I am a resident of Green Temple neighborhood for the last 10 years.

Unfortunately, I was recently informed that the
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parking
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arrangments
in our
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street
have been
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changed
. While in the past
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parking
in the
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street
was
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permited
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only
to the street's residents,
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today
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to the entire public.
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, finding a
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parking
place in our
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street
have become a
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very
challenging job.
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Often
it may take as much as 20 minutes to find a
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parking
place, therefor, causing us significant inconvenience.

Thus
, I believe that the council should return the regulation to their original form.
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As
I am aware to the
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parking
problems in the area I recommend that the council should consider using the open land space off Church
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street
as a public
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parking
lot.

I hope to hear from you in the near future,

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Your
Faithfully
,

Jon Smith
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IELTS letter Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in regard to a recent change in parking regulations made by the council.

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8 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
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