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Dear sir/madam, I am writing with regard to an incorrect fact which has been published in your newspaper edition on 1st April .The article is about Miss Aditi who is a YouTuber, whom I know personally, as, I am her subscriber since she started her channel. Although the content of the article is extremely informative, it is about her journey in the youtube world and her personal details about the bad relations with her father. I noticed a number of mistakes while I was reading an article. You have written that Aditi has completed her 4 years of YouTube journey last month; however, she has completed 5 years. Moreover, aditi’s bonding with her father was extremely fine from the past 2 years. In addition to this, she makes videos related to fashion and lifestyle, not on social issues. Therefore, I would request you to correct the mistakes while making sure at the same time that it will not repeat in future. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Amrita

Dear sir/madam, I am writing with regard to an incorrect fact which has been published in your newspaper edition on 1st April. The article is about Miss Aditi who is a YouTuber, whom I know personally, as, I am her subscriber since she started her channel. Although the content of the article is extremely informative, it is about her journey in the youtube world and her personal details about the bad relations with her father. I noticed a number of mistakes while I was reading an article. You have written that Aditi has completed her 4 years of YouTube journey last month; however, she has completed 5 years. Moreover, aditi’s bonding with her father was extremely fine from the past 2 years. In addition to this, she makes videos related to fashion and lifestyle, not on social issues. Therefore, I would request you to correct the mistakes while making sure at the same time that it will not repeat in future. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Amrita bYYb6
Dear sir/madam, I am writing with regard to an incorrect fact which has been published in your newspaper edition on 1st April. The article is about Miss Aditi who is a YouTuber, whom I know personally, as, I am her subscriber since she started her channel. Although the content of the article is extremely informative, it is about her journey in the youtube world and her personal details about the bad relations with her father. I noticed a number of mistakes while I was reading an article. You have written that Aditi has completed her 4 years of YouTube journey last month; however, she has completed 5 years. Moreover, aditi’s bonding with her father was extremely fine from the past 2 years. In addition to this, she makes videos related to fashion and lifestyle, not on social issues. Therefore, I would request you to correct the mistakes while making sure at the same time that it will not repeat in future. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Amrita
Dear sir/madam,

I am writing with regard to an incorrect fact which has
been published
in your newspaper edition on 1st April. The article is about Miss
Possible spelling mistake found.
Aditi
who is a YouTuber, whom I know
personally
, as, I am her subscriber since she
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
her channel.

Although the content of the article is
extremely
informative, it is about her journey in the
Possible spelling mistake found.
youtube
world and her personal
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
about the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
relations with her father. I noticed a number of mistakes while I was reading an article. You have written that
Possible spelling mistake found.
Aditi
has completed her 4 years of YouTube journey last month;
however
, she has completed 5 years.
Moreover
,
Possible spelling mistake found.
aditi
’s bonding with her father was
extremely
fine from the past 2 years.
In addition
to this, she
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
videos related to fashion and lifestyle, not on social issues.

Therefore
, I would request you to correct the mistakes while making sure at the same time that it will not repeat
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
.

I hope to hear from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Amrita
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IELTS letter Dear sir/madam, I am writing with regard to an incorrect fact which has been published in your newspaper edition on 1st April. The article is about Miss Aditi who is a YouTuber, whom I know personally, as, I am her subscriber since she started her channel. Although the content of the article is extremely informative, it is about her journey in the youtube world and her personal details about the bad relations with her father. I noticed a number of mistakes while I was reading an article. You have written that Aditi has completed her 4 years of YouTube journey last month; however, she has completed 5 years. Moreover, aditi’s bonding with her father was extremely fine from the past 2 years. In addition to this, she makes videos related to fashion and lifestyle, not on social issues. Therefore, I would request you to correct the mistakes while making sure at the same time that it will not repeat in future. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Amrita

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