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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home you realised you had left your credit card there. Write a letter to your friend: -Thank your friend for the holiday. -explain that you left your credit card in their house. -give them instructions of h

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home you realised you had left your credit card there. Write a letter to your friend: -Thank your friend for the holiday. -explain that you left your credit card in their house. -give them instructions of h N1Qb
Hello James, I hope you are doing well; it was great to spend a week with you. I really enjoyed it very much and this trip has relaxed me and now I am ready to work harder to make more money so I can use it for our next vacation. I hope that you will visit me soon and we explore together the city where I live now. On the other hand, I just noticed that I have forgot my credit card at your place. I am not sure where exactly I left it, but it could be either in the living room under the tea table or in the kitchen next to the sink. Once you find it, could you please arrange to send it over to my address via DHL. You will need to provide them with my following details: Name: Abdelghani Alhijawi Cell Phone: 052654741552 Address: Lakeshore Tower, Cluster Y. Apartment number: 2608, Dubai, UAE. Please call DHL at their hotline number so you can schedule for the delivery guy to come to your place and handover my credit card. I look forward to catching up with you soon. Cheers, Abdelghani
Hello James,

I hope you are doing well; it was great to spend a week with you. I
really
enjoyed it
very
much and this trip has relaxed me and
now
I am ready to work harder to
make
more money
so
I can
use
it for our
next
vacation.
I
hope that you will visit me
soon and
we explore together the city where I
live
now
.

On the other hand
, I
just
noticed that I have forgot my credit card at your place.

I am not sure where exactly I
left
it,
but
it could be either in the living room under the tea table or in the kitchen
next
to the sink. Once you find it, could you
please
arrange to
send
it over to my address via DHL.

You will need to provide them with my following
details
:

Name:
Abdelghani
Alhijawi


Cell Phone: 052654741552

Address:
Lakeshore
Tower, Cluster Y. Apartment number: 2608, Dubai, UAE.

Please
call DHL at their hotline number
so
you can schedule for the delivery guy to
come
to your place and handover my credit card.

I look forward to catching up with you
soon
.

Cheers,

Abdelghani
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IELTS letter You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home you realised you had left your credit card there. Write a letter to your friend: -Thank your friend for the holiday. -explain that you left your credit card in their house. -give them instructions of h

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  American English
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5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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