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Dear Rajneet I am so excited to hear that you’ll be moving to canada and congratulations on your new job.

Dear Rajneet I am so excited to hear that you’ll be moving to canada and congratulations on your new job. Geno
Dear Rajneet I am so excited to hear that you’ll be moving to canada and congratulations on your new job. I am glad that you are able to get desired position in extremely dynamic company. As you’ll be probably working in the main branch in city centre, perhaps you could think about living near me in Montreal. It’s the most vibrant and friendly city, where you can find the diverse communities. Not only this, all the grocery stores are just five minutes walk from apartments. In regards to the public transport, you can easily get around Montreal by bus and subway. You just need to make an opus card, for this you have to recharge this card monthly. You can travel as many times as you want with this card. Apart from this, there are best Uber and taxi services for you emergency needs. Lastly, you’ll be able to make good friends at work place. My friend circle is also very vibrant. I know you will like them too. Anyway, i can’t wait to see you. Best wishes, Gurpreet
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Rajneet


I am
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excited to hear that you’ll be moving to
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As you’ll be
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, perhaps you could
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think
about living near me in Montreal. It’s the most vibrant and friendly city, where you can find the diverse communities. Not
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only
this, all the grocery stores are
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five minutes walk from apartments.

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around Montreal by bus and subway. You
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make
an opus card, for this you
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have to
recharge this card monthly. You can travel as
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many
times as you want with this card. Apart from this, there are best Uber and taxi services for you emergency needs.

Lastly
, you’ll be able to
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make
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good
friends at work place. My friend circle is
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very
vibrant. I know you will like them too.

Anyway,
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can’t wait to
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Best wishes,

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Gurpreet
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IELTS letter Dear Rajneet I am so excited to hear that you’ll be moving to canada and congratulations on your new job.

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