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Dear Raj Hope you are well.

Dear Raj Hope you are well. Kej3
Dear Raj Hope you are well. I am very glad that you are moving to my city and eagerly waiting to welcome you! As you have seek for my advice you will have full understanding of my city once you received this letter. Firstly the city that you are moving to is the most beautiful city in my country filled with lots of modern buildings, super markets, hospitals, restaurants and hotels, and excitingly a large garden is available on your days to visit and what is interesting about these gardens are maintained in a very colonial manner moreover it is greenery and colorful flowers, and another interesting thing about the city is very clean and every facility is available on your comfort and my suggestion to you to live in the city just next to the colonial garden where you will have enjoyable view. Also the public transport which was recently being introduced has many benefits for passengers such as online ticketing, a card system that enables you to travel without any complications, every 5minutes you will have transport available within the city to travel anywhere and above all 100% safety is guaranteed. After all most importantly you are able meet new people around the city as mentioned above the city has many facilities that enables many people to visit as tourist or for an employment to the city. And I am confident that you will be able to meet them easily and you are outgoing person and nice to be around which means you will make lot of friends. I am looking forward to welcoming you soon. Till then, Your loving friend Suresh
Dear Raj

Hope you are well. I am
very
glad that you are moving to my city and
eagerly
waiting to welcome you!

As you have
seek
for my advice you will have full understanding of my city once you received this letter.

Firstly
the city that you are moving to is the most
beautiful
city in my country filled with lots of modern buildings, super markets, hospitals, restaurants and hotels, and
excitingly
a large garden is available on your days to visit and what is interesting about these gardens
are maintained
in a
very
colonial manner
moreover
it is greenery and colorful flowers, and another interesting thing about the city is
very
clean and every facility is available on your comfort and my suggestion to you to
live
in the city
just
next
to the colonial garden where you will have enjoyable view.

Also
the public transport which was recently
being introduced
has
many
benefits for passengers such as online ticketing, a card system that enables you to travel without any complications, every 5minutes you will have transport available within the city to travel anywhere and
above all
100% safety
is guaranteed
.

After all
most
importantly
you are able
meet
new
people
around the city as mentioned above the city has
many
facilities that enables
many
people
to visit as tourist or for an employment to the city. And I am confident that you will be able to
meet
them
easily
and you are outgoing person and nice to be around which means you will
make
lot of
friends.

I am looking forward to welcoming you
soon
. Till then,

Your loving friend

Suresh
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IELTS letter Dear Raj Hope you are well.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
273 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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