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You are giving information about your girlfriend to apply for embassy as an interpreter.

You are giving information about your girlfriend to apply for embassy as an interpreter. dl99p
Dear Mr, I am writing to give reference in order to support my girlfriend fill the application for applying embassy. Firstly, I would like to mention that my friend who is my classmate. I have recognized her since my childhood. She is positive girl and can share good mood everybody. She is good at english and maths, plus she can speak two languages easily. Moreover, she have graduated at secondary school with gold medal. In addition to this, every year she has been taking part an International exam and has won a certificate to enter the university. Her behavior is polite to everybody. She can lead other people and encourage them to do tasks which are really difficult by motivating and sharing smart ideas. Based on my observation view her abilities. I strongly believe she has the potentially to be and outstanding candidate at your embassy. I recommend her for admission to your program. Please do not hesitate to contact me for more information. Yors faithfully, XXX
Dear Mr,

I am writing to give reference in order to support my girlfriend fill the application for applying embassy.

Firstly
, I would like to mention that my friend who is my classmate. I have recognized her since my childhood. She is
positive
girl and can share
good
mood everybody. She is
good
at
english
and
maths
, plus she can speak two languages
easily
.
Moreover
, she
have
graduated
at secondary school with gold medal.

In addition
to this, every year she has been taking part an International exam and has won a certificate to enter the university. Her behavior is polite to everybody. She can lead other
people
and encourage them
to do
tasks which are
really
difficult by motivating and sharing smart
ideas
.

Based on my observation view her abilities. I
strongly
believe she has the
potentially
to be and outstanding candidate at your embassy. I recommend her for admission to your program.
Please
do not hesitate to contact me for more information.

Yors
faithfully
,

XXX
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IELTS letter You are giving information about your girlfriend to apply for embassy as an interpreter.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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