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You are giving information about your girlfriend to apply for embassy as an interpreter.

You are giving information about your girlfriend to apply for embassy as an interpreter. dl99p

Dear Mr, I am writing to give reference in order to support my girlfriend fill the application for applying embassy. Firstly, I would like to mention that my friend who is my classmate. I have recognized her since my childhood. She is positive girl and can share good mood everybody. She is good at english and maths, plus she can speak two languages easily. Moreover, she have graduated at secondary school with gold medal. In addition to this, every year she has been taking part an International exam and has won a certificate to enter the university. Her behavior is polite to everybody. She can lead other people and encourage them to do tasks which are really difficult by motivating and sharing smart ideas. Based on my observation view her abilities. I strongly believe she has the potentially to be and outstanding candidate at your embassy. I recommend her for admission to your program. Please do not hesitate to contact me for more information. Yors faithfully, XXX

Dear Mr,

I am writing to give reference in order to support my girlfriend fill the application for applying embassy.

Firstly
, I would like to mention that my friend who is my classmate. I have recognized her since my childhood. She is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 girl and can share This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 mood everybody. She is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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maths
, plus she can speak two languages easily
. Moreover
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have
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graduated
 at secondary school with gold medal.

In addition
 to this, every year she has been taking part an International exam and has won a certificate to enter the university. Her behavior is polite to everybody. She can lead other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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to do
 tasks which are really
 difficult by motivating and sharing smart This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
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Based on my observation view her abilities. I strongly
 believe she has the potentially
 to be and outstanding candidate at your embassy. I recommend her for admission to your program. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 do not hesitate to contact me for more information.

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IELTS letter You are giving information about your girlfriend to apply for embassy as an interpreter.

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

166 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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