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You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter  Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college  Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her  Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter  Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college  Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her  Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her jR8AX
Dear Anna, How have you been recently? It has been a while to talk to you. Hope you are doing well. I heard from Alan that you are facing a big decision to make now. To be a college student or to go straight to a career for your future plan? I assume you would not like to study in a college. In college, you might spend a lot of time on assignments and school activities that will affect your leisure time with your family and friends. I know how much you love to have your personal life. Finding a career is better than being a student at this moment. By gaining some working experiences not only can build your confidence in dealing with people, and also find out your future goal. Since you are a talkative, kind and passionate about new things. The hospitality industry will be a perfect choice to you. For example, being a waiter or tour guide could be a good start. You will meet up many people and explore the world with these jobs. Whatever you decide to do, I will always be there for you. Keep in touch. Best wishes, Allison
Dear Anna,

How have you been recently? It has been a while to talk to you. Hope you are doing well. I heard from Alan that you are facing a
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big
decision to
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make
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now
. To be a college student or to go straight to a career for your future plan?

I assume you would not like to study in a college. In college, you might spend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
time on assignments and school activities that will affect your leisure time with your family and friends. I know how much you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to have your personal life.

Finding a career is better than being a student at this moment. By gaining
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some
working experiences not
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only
can build your confidence in dealing with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
, and
also
find out your future goal.

Since you are a talkative, kind and passionate about new things. The hospitality industry will be a perfect choice to you.
For example
, being a waiter or tour guide could be a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
. You will
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meet
up
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many
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people
and explore the world with these jobs.

Whatever you decide to do, I will always be there for you.
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Keep
in touch.

Best wishes,

Allison
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IELTS letter You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter  Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college  Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her  Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

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6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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