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Business email to the manager

Business email to the manager B6k9

How are you doing today? I am not so good. Because I have woken up at 11 am. Would you believe that? I have not done this for almost one month. That is why I felt upset. However, I have not slept since that, and I have not finished my day so badly. Firstly, I started to watch videos on LinkedIn learning. It was good and I finished one of them. Tomorrow I will start another one, I have got almost 3-4 online courses to finish. After completing all of them I am planning to surpass my excel skills. I want to become an advanced Excel user. When I do reach this goal, I feel that anything or anyone on Earth cannot stop me. But of course, it is not so. Because there will be always something to learn. Hope it will. And then, I have watched the movie which is called the Green Mile. I have read that before. And I was wondering to watch the movie. I think the book is much better than the movie. However, the movie is also good. Additionally, I have watched some episodes from Friends. To me, that is a really good series for enjoyably improving English. I think that is enough for today. I am not going to write so much. See you next time, my man!

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today
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good
. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
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.

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start
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got
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After
 completing all of them I am planning to surpass my "Excel" is a proper noun and needs to be capitalized.Excel
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stop
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so
. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 there will be always something to learn. Hope it will.

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movie
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movie
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You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgreatsatisfyingexceptionalpositiveacceptablesatisfactory
good
 series for enjoyably
 improving English.

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think
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enough
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today
. I am not going to write This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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man
! 