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Business email to the manager

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I want to greet you and say huge thanks for being with me. Maybe you might think that I can’t make good and powerful sentences. And you are totally right. That is my weakness and I want to excel in it. I hope it will work to write to you every day. Today was not extraordinary for me. The same things I do which I did in previous days. However, I woke up a bit earlier than previous ones. Today I have started new online course on LinkedIn which is called Understanding Financial Ratios. But my internet connection was not so good, I could not even watch the lessons. Fortunately, I have downloaded the videos before, and I watched the videos from my phone. Today, it was kind of problematic day. Because, I mistakenly sent an old link to the volunteers as well as they registered via that link that doesn’t work now. But we were lucky and a bit professional to fix the problem. Also, I am the addict of Friends series. I really like that. It makes me so funny as well as I can improve my English skills. Sometimes when I am at home, I do even talk to myself or my family in English. But right now, I want to watch some extra episodes, I can’t due to my bad internet connection. I really detest that internet. I want to greet you and say huge thanks for being with me. Maybe you might think that I can’t make good and powerful sentences. And you are totally right. That is my weakness and I want to excel in it. I hope it will work to write to you every day. Today was not extraordinary for me. The same things I do which I did in previous days. However, I woke up a bit earlier than previous ones. Today I have started new online course on LinkedIn which is called Understanding Financial Ratios. But my internet connection was not so good, I could not even watch the lessons. Fortunately, I have downloaded the videos before, and I watched the videos from my phone. Today, it was kind of problematic day. Because, I mistakenly sent an old link to the volunteers as well as they registered via that link that doesn’t work now. But we were lucky and a bit professional to fix the problem. Also, I am the addict of Friends series. I really like that. It makes me so funny as well as I can improve my English skills. Sometimes when I am at home, I do even talk to myself or my family in English. But right now, I want to watch some extra episodes, I can’t due to my bad internet connection. I really detest that internet.
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right
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That is
my weakness and I
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want
to excel in it. I hope it will
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work
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Today
was not extraordinary for me. The same things I do which I did in
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previous
days.
However
, I woke up a
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bit
earlier than
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previous
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ones
.
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Today
I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
new online course on LinkedIn which
is called
Understanding Financial Ratios.
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But
my internet
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connection
was not
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so
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good
, I could not even
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watch
the lessons.
Fortunately
, I have downloaded the
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videos
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before
, and I
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watched
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videos
from my phone.

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Today
, it was kind of problematic day.
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, I
mistakenly
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sent
an
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old
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link
to the volunteers as
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well
as they registered via that
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link
that doesn’t
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work
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now
.
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But
we were lucky and a
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bit
professional to
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fix
the problem.

Also
, I am the addict of Friends series. I
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really
like that. It
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makes
me
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so
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improve
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skills
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Sometimes
when I am at home, I do even talk to myself or my family in English.
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But
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right
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, I
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watch
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some
extra episodes, I
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can’t
due to my
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bad
internet
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connection
. I
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really
detest that internet. I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
want
to greet you and say huge thanks for being with me. Maybe you might
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
can’t
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
and powerful sentences. And you are
totally
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
right
.
That is
my weakness and I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
want
to excel in it. I hope it will
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
to write to you every day.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Today
was not extraordinary for me. The same things I do which I did in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
previous
days.
However
, I woke up a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bit
earlier than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
previous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ones
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Today
I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
new online course on LinkedIn which
is called
Understanding Financial Ratios.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
my internet
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
connection
was not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
, I could not even
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
watch
the lessons.
Fortunately
, I have downloaded the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
videos
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
, and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watched
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
videos
from my phone.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Today
, it was kind of problematic day.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
, I
mistakenly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
link
to the volunteers as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
well
as they registered via that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
link
that doesn’t
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
now
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
we were lucky and a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bit
professional to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
the problem.

Also
, I am the addict of Friends series. I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
really
like that. It
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
makes
me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
funny
as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
well
as I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
my English
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Sometimes
when I am at home, I do even talk to myself or my family in English.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
right
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
now
, I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
want
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
watch
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
extra episodes, I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
can’t
due to my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
internet
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
connection
. I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
really
detest that internet.
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IELTS letter Business email to the manager

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
462 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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